举例说明:我们学校充满爱-Our School----Full of Lov 我们学校充满爱

【内容提示】

假定你们学校有同学得了重病需要做手术，但手术费用昂贵，该同学家里负担不起。于是，你校学生会便号召师生捐助。在短短的几天内学生会就收到好多钱。在许多好心人的救助下该同学顺利做了手术，他很感激大家。这正是：你们学校充满爱心。【作文示范】

Our School----Full of Lov

On April20, aftr two classs in th morning, th broadcasting station① of our school wnt on th air. Th announcr②told us th sad nws that a studnt namd Tong Kai in Junior2 ndd a kidny transplant③. It would cost on hundrd thousand yuan. It was impossibl for his family to pay so much mony, but Tong was critically④ ill, so th Studnt Union calld on vryon to do somthing to hlp Tong Kai.

Th nws soon sprad ovr th campus. vryon was anxious about his illnss. From that day on, th tachrs and studnts bgan to contribut mony to hlp him. W wr not rich, but all of us wr gnrous contributors⑤. Th tachrs donatd⑥ part of thir salaris. Many studnts hlpd Tong with thir pockt mony. Li Bin, a studnt in Junior 2, contributd ighty yuan. H said,“Th mony w hav contributd is not nough for Tong's opration, but w hav don what w can. W all hop that Tong Kai will gt wll soon and com back to study with us.”His simpl words xprssd our dp affction⑦. In only thr days th Studnt Union rcivd tn thousand yuan in all.

With th hlp of many schoolmats, tachrs and othr kind popl, Tong got nough mony and was opratd on succssfully. H said,“I thought I was th most unlucky prson in th world, but now I think just th opposit. I liv with th car and lov of thousands of kind popl. I'll fac lif bravly.”Whil saying ths words, h couldn't kp back his tars.

What a warm big family our school is!

（选自《英语画刊》高中版1996年第6期）

【词语解释】

①broadcasting station广播站

②announcr[ 'nauns ] n．广播员

③kidny transplant['kidni tr$ns'pl%:nt]肾移植

④critically['kritik li] ad．危急地

⑤contributor [k n'tribju(:)t ] n．捐助者

⑥donat[d u'nit] v．捐赠；捐献

⑦affction[ 'fkM n] n．爱，友爱

【写法指要】

这是一篇用事实说明“校园充满爱”的文章。第一段是背景介绍；第二、三段用举例法说明主题，大部分是概述，只举了一个典型事例，而且也没有用“for xampl”等衔接词语。最后用一个简短句子总结全文，抒发感情。

举例说明:我们学校充满爱-Our School----Full of Lov